"woah you give me a cold shoulder"
Should be:
"though you give a cold shoulder"
The rest reads fine, although i thought the band was "bob glitter and the
Glitterhouse five"?

And chance you remember the lyrics to the end song? i can not recall the first
Line and its driving me nuts"

(something) is sorrow,
The devil is hate.

A dream is tomorrow,
A fool can not wait.

An artist is beauty that rises above,
And looks in the eyes of an angel.
An angel is love...!

Why...! why do i love you, i love you, i do.
Why...? it's because my angel is you.
I know, yes, i know.
I know.
(repeat first part much faster)
End